Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #31,

Posted on 19/04/2014 by jrbsays

The Tan Renga challenge is to write a second stanza to this haiku, traditionally that second stanza is 7-7 syllables:

in the backyard
the rainbow in the birdbath breaks –
a sipping Magpie

© Chèvrefeuille

My response…

in the backyard
the rainbow in the birdbath breaks –
a sipping Magpie
monochromatic moment
in a technicolour world

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2014

About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy living on Gubbi Gubbi land. Occasional writer of Haiku.
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1 Response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #31,

  1. Chèvrefeuille says:
    20/04/2014 at 8:16 AM

    Wow … this is such a nice second stanza

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