Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #31,

The Tan Renga challenge is to write a second stanza to this haiku, traditionally that second stanza is 7-7 syllables:

in the backyard
the rainbow in the birdbath breaks –
a sipping Magpie

© Chèvrefeuille

My response…

in the backyard
the rainbow in the birdbath breaks –
a sipping Magpie
monochromatic moment
in a technicolour world

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2014

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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One Response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #31,

  1. Wow … this is such a nice second stanza

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