Haiku For Carpe Diem Special #64, Garry Gay’s “touched”

Posted on 28/10/2013 by jrbsays

Carpe Diem’s prompt today is a haiku by Gary Gay”touched”. The aim is to write a haiku that catches the same mood as the haiku by Garry Gay

touched
in the darkness–
by a snowflake

© Gary Gay

My response to Gary’s haiku…

Orb-Web-Spiderin the darkness
my face enveloped
Orb Spider’s web

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy living on Gubbi Gubbi land. Occasional writer of Haiku.
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11 Responses to Haiku For Carpe Diem Special #64, Garry Gay’s “touched”

  1. Mark M. Redfearn says:
    28/10/2013 at 9:58 PM

    Don’t you just hate walking face-first into spider webs? 😉

    Touched One and Touched Two

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  2. Joanne Moceri-Taveira says:
    29/10/2013 at 2:03 AM

    I freakin’ hate when that happens!

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  3. becca givens says:
    29/10/2013 at 2:26 AM

    Yikes — there is something about any part of my body getting caught in a spider web! 😀

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  4. siggiofmaine says:
    29/10/2013 at 3:46 AM

    Love this response.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  5. moondustwriter says:
    29/10/2013 at 5:18 AM

    It’s a singular feeling isn’t it
    Sometimes I am concerned that I walked through someone’s home other times I hope the creature was not at home 🙂

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:
    29/10/2013 at 5:52 AM

    that silken touch… can be quite shocking

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  7. Chèvrefeuille says:
    29/10/2013 at 7:25 AM

    Bwahh … spider’s web in my face … nice haiku JRB

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  8. WabiSabi says:
    29/10/2013 at 9:45 AM

    I HATE when that happens!! However, it was a great take on the prompt! 🙂

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  9. Maggie Grace says:
    29/10/2013 at 10:00 AM

    Wabi said what I was going to write. LOL. and ewwwww. Definitely a gently touch though.

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  10. atrm61 says:
    29/10/2013 at 8:41 PM

    If the web is by a spider,one can just wave it away but if spun by devious minds then what?A thought provoking Haiku-unique perspective:-)

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  11. Ese' s Voice says:
    30/10/2013 at 8:50 PM

    🙂 Very vivid! Too real for words and, though makes me smile, still the feeling when it has happened…NOT so much! Well done, JRB.

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