Carpe Diem #507, Shiki’s ”smoke whirls”

Carpe Diem haiku prompt #507 is Shiki’s ”smoke whirls”…

smoke whirls
after the passage of a train –
young foliage

© Masaoka Shiki

My response…

commuter train
swirling in the wake
McDonalds’ wrappers

Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2014


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Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of and other bits and other bobs.
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2 Responses to Carpe Diem #507, Shiki’s ”smoke whirls”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    A true-to-life urban snapshot!

    Smudged with Smoke


  2. Ese' s Voice says:

    I can really visualize this one! 🙂


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