Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #42, ”before the spring equinox”

For this Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge we are given”before the spring equinox” by Yasomura Rotsu…

before the spring equinox;
the cold will last
only a night or two more
© Yasomura Rotsu

My response…

before the spring equinox;
the cold will last
only a night or two more
as the sun lengthens its tune
at the expense of the moon

Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2014