Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #42, ”before the spring equinox”

For this Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge we are given”before the spring equinox” by Yasomura Rotsu…

before the spring equinox;
the cold will last
only a night or two more
© Yasomura Rotsu

My response…

before the spring equinox;
the cold will last
only a night or two more
as the sun lengthens its tune
at the expense of the moon

Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2014

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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One Response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #42, ”before the spring equinox”

  1. Awesome continuation … departing spring will bring longer days. Chapeau!

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