Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #41, ”a fallen flower” by Moritake

The Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge today is the haiku ”a fallen flower” by Moritake. Our goal, to add two lines to form a renga…

a fallen flower
flew back to its perch
a butterfly

© Moritake

My response…

a fallen flower
flew back to its perch
a butterfly
expectant mourners gather
her last will and testament

Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2014

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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One Response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #41, ”a fallen flower” by Moritake

  1. This is a beautiful perspective on the prompt — just gorgeous, and heartfelt.

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