Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #37, Celestine’s “ribbon of colours”

This Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge is a wonderful haiku composed by Celestine. Our goal, to create a second stanza:

ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
dance of the spirits

© Celestine of Reading Pleasure

My response:

ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
dance of the spirits
as the sun slowly goes down
the taste of salt on her skin

Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2014

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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2 Responses to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #37, Celestine’s “ribbon of colours”

  1. That is so very beautiful and romantic!

  2. Ese' s Voice says:

    The mood and feeling is in the air 🙂

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