Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #30, “daffodils open” by Jules Paige

For this Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge, we are given a haiku by Jules Paige to add two lines to.

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daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven

drifting across the valley
a Welsh choir’s song of praise

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2014

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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One Response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #30, “daffodils open” by Jules Paige

  1. becca givens says:

    How idyllic … my spirit sighs!!

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