Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #28, “a silent cry”

This Tan Renga challenge from Carpe Diem is Chèvrefeuille’s A Silent Cry. Our goal is to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to his haiku…

flight of the eagle
stepping into the world of dreams –
a silent cry

© Chèvrefeuille

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flight of the eagle
stepping into the world of dreams –
a silent cry
aloof, watchful sentinel
the unwary find eyrie

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2014

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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5 Responses to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #28, “a silent cry”

  1. kaykuala says:

    Arrogant and fast, woe to the prey! Good one JrB!

    Hank

  2. Sun says:

    the cycle of nature. i like the word, eyrie. nice!!

  3. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Is it possible simply to stumble upon (or into) an eyrie? 😉

    Tan Renga Shadows

  4. so your warning remain watchful or…
    Well done as always JRB

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