Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Imaginator’s ”with light in your eyes”

Today, Imaginator’s haiku ”with light in your eyes”  is given as the Carpe Diem TanTrenga challenge. Our aim is to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to the haiku to form the Tan Renga.

With light in your eyes
You embrace me in your arms
Our hearts beat as one

in separate hemispheres
photo synchronicity

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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7 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Imaginator’s ”with light in your eyes”

  1. Cathy Tenzo says:

    I really love your completion here!

  2. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    “in separate hemispheres”

    I often feel that way with my significant other! 😉

  3. Unique completion!

  4. oh no, a long distance romance…

  5. Sun says:

    hey, if it works, it works no matter how – great finish, JRB ☺

  6. Separate hemispheres. sounds a little bit sad… very nicely done.

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