Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Kaykuala’s ”rustling leaves dancing”

The Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge today is Kaykuala’s ”rustling leaves dancing”. Our challenge to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to Kaykuala’s haiku…

I tried to conjure two sweet lines, but all I could think of was Candi…

Rustling leaves dancing
Light breeze brushing rosy cheeks
Young hearts aflutter

floating on a fleeting breeze
the promise of tomorrow

I hope you enjoyed the music and see the sense in sharing, this one and only life.

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

If you like these Haiku, visit JRB’s Haiku Gifts

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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5 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Kaykuala’s ”rustling leaves dancing”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    O those evanescent promises!

  2. Nice continuation of this Tan Renga JRB, thank you for the music too … very nice song.

  3. atrm61 says:

    Love that-“promise of tomorrow” 🙂

  4. Sun says:

    nice music and great finish especially with “fleeting breeze”

  5. A fleeting promise… too common… great completion

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