Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge – Sun’s ”gathering seashells”

Our Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge today is Sun’s ”gathering seashells”. The goal is to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to Sun’s haiku…

gethering-shells.jpg!BlogArtist: Eugene de Blaas

gathering seashells
while ocean tide rise and falls
two sisters bicker

finders keepers but, who’ll
sell sea shells by the sea shore?

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of and other bits and other bobs.
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9 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge – Sun’s ”gathering seashells”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Only she who can keep a straight face! 😉


  2. WabiSabi says:

    Wow I had forgotten that old saying,’finders, keepers,’ Thanks for the reminder of a simpler time in my life……childhood!


  3. memories so fine, but would we want to do it again?


  4. kalpana solsi says:

    beautiful. thanks for reminding me of an old saying and a tongue twister.


  5. oh this was great,,, builds a whole story.


  6. Cathy Tenzo says:

    This put a smile on my face. I love all the old tongue twisters


  7. Sun says:

    such a perfect ending – bringing in the wonderful days of rhymes and favorite sayings. thank you! 🙂


  8. atrm61 says:

    This is such a moot question ;-)Loved this:-)


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