Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XX, WabiSabi’s ”old beacon”

Our Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge today is WabiSabi’s ”old beacon”. Our goal is to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to compliment Wabi Sabi’s haiku…

Old_Lighthouse,_North_Ronaldsay_-_geograph.org.uk_-_70444Image by Alex Cameron

old beacon
hailing all strangers –
mind the land

scattered on desolate shore
sailors’ souls, pebble dashed

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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13 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XX, WabiSabi’s ”old beacon”

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    luv your “pebble dashed”

    much love…

  2. A wonderful way to complete this Tan Renga JRB … it makes the scene, started in the first stanza, complete. Thank you for your daily effort to participate.

  3. atrm61 says:

    Oh no!How terrible but many a seashore may be the graveyard of sailors in reality.A wonderful completion:-)

  4. Cathy Tenzo says:

    oh yes! I quite like this image.

  5. Sun says:

    love your second line – a beauty. 🙂

  6. Oh — this was sad.. but a wonderful completion.

  7. WabiSabi says:

    I love the way you scattered souls and pebbles on the shore of life…..in two lines!! Great! 🙂

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