Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIX, Carol’s ”tickling ivories”

The Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge today is Carol’s ”tickling ivories”. The aim to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to Carol’s haiku…

Casablanca,_Trailer_Screenshot

tickling ivories
scintillating music sound
filling the inner soul

sultry casablanca bar
where a kiss, is just, a kiss

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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26 Responses to Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIX, Carol’s ”tickling ivories”

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    luv the vintage romance completion

    much love…

  2. A romantic completion JRB.

  3. WabiSabi says:

    And a smile is just a smile……and you sent one my way today! thank you!

  4. Romantic it is…that movie picture kiss!

  5. Sumana Roy says:

    nicely done………..

  6. Jessica Slavin says:

    aww, i love it! such a great movie

  7. artmusedog says:

    Love the completion and your wit! One of my favorite movies ~ well penned ~ carol, xxx

    ps. bit late responding

  8. Cathy Tenzo says:

    Ah yes, play it again. Sam. Delightful!

  9. atrm61 says:

    Ah and here I was hoping it was something more;-)Good one JRB:-)

  10. Sun says:

    what a great classic finish 🙂

  11. siggiofmaine says:

    Love this…it’s just “so right” a completion !
    Peace
    Siggi

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