Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVIII, Joanne’s “by the shallow pond”

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge today is Joanne’s “by the shallow pond”.

by the shallow pond
reflection drawing northern fowl
a warm sun shimmers

he recalls that summer dress
a glimpsed outline of her breast

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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10 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVIII, Joanne’s “by the shallow pond”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    You have an eye for…oh, you know! 😉

    Hiding the Stars

  2. Gillena Cox says:

    luv the shift outside of the pond, very sensous
    much love…

  3. Sumana Roy says:

    nice warm completion… 😀

  4. artmusedog says:

    Well done and very sensuous ending ~ thanks, carol, xxx

    Thanks for ‘visiting’ and for your comments ^_^

  5. theinnerzone says:

    Sensual, alluring image to recall. Lovely!

  6. Nicely done JRB … a little bit naughty … but that I like a lot.

  7. atrm61 says:

    Cutely naughty JRB -loved the surprising completion;-)

  8. Sun says:

    sweet and playful – ☺

  9. Cathy Tenzo says:

    These are fond memories. I love the way you completed this one.

  10. Wonderful.. Somerwhere there is a young man inside…

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