Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVI, Managua Gunn’s ”in hidden places”

Today’s Tan Renga challenge from Carpe Diem is Managua Gunn’s ”in hidden places”. The goal is to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to Managua’s haiku…

3115345_c9f55951Image by Sue Mischyshyn

in hidden places
under the porch floorboards-
cherry blossoms

fluttering curtains of lace
hide furtive lover’s embrace

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of and other bits and other bobs.
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9 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVI, Managua Gunn’s ”in hidden places”

  1. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    Ah! A nice rhyming finish. Well done!


  2. Ye Pirate says:

    Now that is very beautiful, and adds emotion and sensuality.


  3. kaykuala says:

    A lot of wonderful things happen when they are alone! Nicely JRB!



  4. Cathy Tenzo says:

    And we get a peek, thanks to you. Well done.


  5. Sumana Roy says:

    hiding highlighted wonderfully……….both in haiku and in your lines…..very nice…


  6. Ah! What an exciting second stanza you have composed JRB … very nicely done.


  7. Delightful and those petals picked….


  8. Steph says:

    Nice finish. I like the word furtive which implies forbidden. Makes us think.


  9. Sun says:

    Ooo, behind the lace something so wonderful… ☺


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