Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIV, Patricia’s “ghosts of the ancients”

Our Tan Renga challenge from Carpe Diem today is Patricia’s “ghosts of the ancients”. The aim being to add 2 x 7 syllable lines to Patricia’s haiku.

800px-Stonehenge_(sun)Image by simonwakefield

ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground

legends, wrapped in history
encircled by mystery

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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8 Responses to Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIV, Patricia’s “ghosts of the ancients”

  1. And how true that is. Well-penned.

  2. kaykuala says:

    How true JRB! It’s still mysteriously wrapped in questions! Nicely!

    Hank

  3. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    It is the encircling mystery that intrigues me so!

  4. Gillena Cox says:

    nice one

    much love…

  5. becca givens says:

    It is because of that very mystery — this is a place I have on my list of places to visit. 😀

  6. You kept within stone-henge… well done… a sacred piece

  7. Sun says:

    your completion a well-rounded circle and the photo wraps it up nicely. ☺

  8. Your ending stays in the moment and feeling. Wonderful!

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