The Tan Renga challenge from Carpe Diem today is Lothar”s (Rheumatologe) “this dark autumn night”.
Today I take you from Lothar’s northern autumn night, to my Brisbane back yard…
this dark autumn night
the bright stars of milky way
cries of geese above
squawks from the poolside palm trees
as flying foxes squabble
Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2013
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That squawking is sometimes startling. Interesting completion. 🙂
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Indeed, they often startle me!
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nice tan renga; fruit bats used to visit my mango tree, before i had it cut done
much love….
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Don’t like bats, or mangos?
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Cries and squawks and squabbles—love the cacophony!
My Tan Renga Completion
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Have you ever heard a real Caco?
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Nice direction … I wasn’t aware of the term “flying fox”! Clever 😉
I had to google … Thank you for sharing a new term for me … it’s early on this side of the world … that calls for more coffee and envisioning warmer weather by the pool! 😀
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They do squabble, but I find when they swoop out from the dark unannounced more….challenging 😉
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lol ~ love the ‘flying foxes squabbling’ ~ hmmm leads me to ponder ~ Happy Day, carol, xxx
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I hope it’s a happy ponder Carol 😉
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Lovely completion – do different from the wintery ones.
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Well it is late Spring down here so sometimes I have to add a little Southern Hemisphere to my responses 😉
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Ha.. flying foxes.. never would have thougtth of that.
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They gave me a little prompt 😉
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I want to see the foxes fly with the geese.
Cheers!
JzB
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So, the flying foxes aren’t batty enough for you huh JzB 😉
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Leave it to you to be acquainted with the mother of all bats!! Love it!!
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I believe I know the father too Wabi 🙂
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Wonderful JRB … from the north to the south … change of animals … nicely completed Tan Renga.
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please keep them fly foxes but keep your tan renga’s flowing. 😆 ~always a joy to read…
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Aha JRB!Like the flying foxes who decide to roost and squabble-warmly wrapped in their own wings;-)Fascinating completion:-)
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