Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIII, Lothar”s (Rheumatologe) “this dark autumn night”

The Tan Renga challenge from Carpe Diem today is Lothar”s (Rheumatologe) “this dark autumn night”.

Today I take you from Lothar’s northern autumn night, to my Brisbane back yard…


this dark autumn night
the bright stars of milky way
cries of geese above

squawks from the poolside palm trees
as flying foxes squabble

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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21 Responses to Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIII, Lothar”s (Rheumatologe) “this dark autumn night”

  1. That squawking is sometimes startling. Interesting completion. 🙂


  2. Gillena Cox says:

    nice tan renga; fruit bats used to visit my mango tree, before i had it cut done

    much love….


  3. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Cries and squawks and squabbles—love the cacophony!

    My Tan Renga Completion


  4. becca givens says:

    Nice direction … I wasn’t aware of the term “flying fox”! Clever 😉

    I had to google … Thank you for sharing a new term for me … it’s early on this side of the world … that calls for more coffee and envisioning warmer weather by the pool! 😀


  5. artmusedog says:

    lol ~ love the ‘flying foxes squabbling’ ~ hmmm leads me to ponder ~ Happy Day, carol, xxx


  6. E A M Harris says:

    Lovely completion – do different from the wintery ones.


  7. Ha.. flying foxes.. never would have thougtth of that.


  8. jazzbumpa says:

    I want to see the foxes fly with the geese.



  9. WabiSabi says:

    Leave it to you to be acquainted with the mother of all bats!! Love it!!


  10. Wonderful JRB … from the north to the south … change of animals … nicely completed Tan Renga.


  11. Sun says:

    please keep them fly foxes but keep your tan renga’s flowing. 😆 ~always a joy to read…


  12. atrm61 says:

    Aha JRB!Like the flying foxes who decide to roost and squabble-warmly wrapped in their own wings;-)Fascinating completion:-)


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