Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #VIII, MMT’s ”even candent days”

The Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge today is Magical Mystery Teacher’s (MMT) ”Even Candent Days”. Our mission, should we choose to accept it, is to add two 7 syllable lines to MMT’s haiku…

Chilopsis_linearis_flower_2Image by Stan Shebs

Even candent days
cannot drive the willow leaves
from their homing place

flowing purple petals chime
the native bees dinner time

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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7 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #VIII, MMT’s ”even candent days”

  1. atrm61 says:

    Love the lyrical quality to this completion JRB:-)

  2. eliz frank says:

    Lovely… I like the underlying humor…or perhaps playfulness.
    Eliz

  3. E A M Harris says:

    I like this. It has lightness and humour.

  4. WabiSabi says:

    As always you send smiles from Australia my way! Hope you are enjoying your spring!!

  5. With petals like that I’d love to be a bee..

  6. Sun says:

    i wonder now, do bees have a dinner bell? delightful finish ♥

  7. A wonderful completed Tan Renga … I like those two lines you have added … makes it a light and joyful Tan renga.

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