Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #IV “Becca Givens’ River Stones”

Our 4th Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge for November is Becca Givens “River Stones”. The aim is to add two x 7 syllable lines to Becca’s haiku to form a Renga…


river stones
caressed by flowing water
pale moon shines

gentle fingers enthrall her
poacher bags another trout

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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11 Responses to Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #IV “Becca Givens’ River Stones”

  1. WabiSabi says:

    I did not know there was such a thing as a trout poacher! 🙂 I just have one question though. Whose fingers are enthralling who? :>


  2. artmusedog says:

    ah, yes! a fish! ~ great completion to tan renga ~ great photo ~ happy week to you, carol xxx


  3. Gillena Cox says:

    oh Wow what a shift, our line are splendid, and i’ve learnt about ‘tickling trout is a poacher’s art’
    happy you stopped over at my blog

    much love…


  4. Sun says:

    your completion makes fishing sound so…thrilling! 🙂 good one!!


  5. Great completion!


  6. toadslayer says:

    Sounds like a start a very interesting story.


  7. Surprising completion JRB.


  8. Gracy says:

    Nice unexpected ending to the Tan Renga. Well done!


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