Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #17, Atreyee’s “Palette of Colour

The Tan Renga challenge is to take a given 5-7-5 haiku and enhance it with two more 7 syllable lines.

Today’s haiku is by Atreyee

Palette of colours
Chrysanthemums bestowing
fragrance everywhere

Nature’s gallery unfolds
commuters driving on by

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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3 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #17, Atreyee’s “Palette of Colour

  1. when I drive, I notice most everything around me….maybe why my husband prefers to drive!

  2. Maybe it’s better that they keep their eyes on the road 🙂

  3. Sun says:

    driving by a good thing – sitting in traffic not so. but with flowers to view – okay, can handle. 🙂

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