Haiku For Carpe Diem #304, Yanagi Chiru (Willow leaves fall)

Our haiku prompt for today from Carpe Diem is the kigo Yanagi Chiru (Willow leaves fall)

Winter Willow By Jarosław PocztarskiImage by Jarosław Pocztarski

summer birds have flown
winter’s frost caressing bough
willow weep no more

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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13 Responses to Haiku For Carpe Diem #304, Yanagi Chiru (Willow leaves fall)

  1. Cathy Tenzo says:

    I like the complexity of this one.

  2. Do you think your urging will keep the willow from weeping?

    Shedding Willow

  3. 4joyjoanne says:

    without her fronds, it’s more difficult to weep, I guess…

  4. A wonderful haiku, as Cathy already said that complexity is the true strength of this haiku. If you don’t mind I would like to use this one in one of our upcoming Tan Renga Challenges.

  5. Maggie Grace says:

    This one leaves me speechless and pondering which is wonderful. Magic haiku.

  6. love this… a real masterpiece..

  7. WabiSabi says:

    I love the peaceful winter scene you’ve painted with you words!

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