Haiku For Carpe Diem #287, Shinryoo (new coolness)

The Carpe Diem haiku prompt today is the kigo Shinryoo (new coolness).



Image by Tomas Castelazo

with a new coolness
vintner prepares the presses
for fruit most devine


spring’s newborn
destiny fulfilled

600px-Luca_Patrone_Caterina_in_autumnImage by Lucapatrone

the girls of summer
respond with a new coolness
their skirts lowered

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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17 Responses to Haiku For Carpe Diem #287, Shinryoo (new coolness)

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    The last one is certainly not least, in my estimation!

    Cooling Breezes


  2. 4joyjoanne says:

    delightful set, espec. those modest gals…


  3. WabiSabi says:

    Lovely exploration of coolness but the third one is my favorite! Perfect!


  4. jazzbumpa says:

    Wait . . . what?!?

    We’re sacrificing babies now?



  5. Love that third one… all that sudden modesty (or just being cold)


  6. Maggie Grace says:

    Laughing at JzB cuz I had the same thought at first. Lovely haiku for coolness and count me as one of the followers of #3 being my favorite.


  7. Cathy Tenzo says:

    I also like the last one the best. That’s a sad coolness.


  8. JRB what can I say … that (sorry I can’t help it) that 3rd is really wonderful. Departing summer caught in the longer skirts … damn … all that female beauty hidden … 🙂


  9. jrbsays says:

    Ahhh yes, but the joy of Spring and those rising hem lines 😉


  10. Ese' s Voice says:

    All the way from nature’ s beauty to the unpredictable mind of girls. Or not so unpredictable. 🙂
    I enjoyed, JRB!


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