Haiku For Carpe Diem #262, Moon in the water

Today’s Carpe Diem Haiku prompt is Moon in the water.

moon in the water
breaststroke ‘cross a silent lake
young lovers caress

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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15 Responses to Haiku For Carpe Diem #262, Moon in the water

  1. Ese' s Voice says:

    Yours comes not just with a beautiful image but also brings the mood you’ve created along, JRB.


  2. howanxious says:

    Lovely setting, creating a beautiful image. There is something gentle about the idea of young lovers.


  3. WabiSabi says:

    So very romantic! What a delightful vision you created for me! Thank you!


  4. Ye Pirate says:

    Beautiful, clever and a wonderful picture…


  5. Maggie Grace says:

    Wasn’t sure if breaststroke went with the mood like a kind of juxtaposition. Romantic haiku if no yucky living things in the water. I know, silly me.


  6. JazzBumpa says:

    hey – wait a minute
    what about us OLD lovers



  7. Wonderful and very romantic haiku … a sweet image you have painted here with your words.


  8. Cathy Tenzo says:

    I love haiku that contain a story. Very nice and romantic.


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