Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #4, ‘deeper darkness’ by Bjorn Rudberg

Today Carpe Diem gives us another Tan Renga challenge using Bjorn Rudberg‘s Haiku

after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
(Bjorn Rudberg)

 The challenge is to add to this 5-7-5 Haiku with two x 7 syllable lines to complete the story…

after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper

as two heartbeats synchronise
whispered promises are made

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

If you like these Haiku, visit JRB’s Haiku Gifts

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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16 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #4, ‘deeper darkness’ by Bjorn Rudberg

  1. yerpirate says:

    That is very nice and fitting, I must say..

  2. Jessica Slavin says:

    I can see this! Nice image

  3. 4joy says:

    all the good stuff happens in the dark!

  4. becca givens says:

    Romance in the air!! 😀

  5. Lovely completion, I sense romance and deep love in this Tan Renga.

  6. Maggie Grace says:

    Ah, so beautiful!

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