Haiku For Carpe Diem Special #41, Kikusha-Ni’s ‘lost in the woods’

Today’s Carpe Diem Haiku prompt is Kikusha-Ni’s ‘lost in the woods’.

lost in the woods
only the sound of a leaf
falling on my hat

As Kristjaan requested, I have attempted to recreate the same sense, tone and Spirit as Kikusha-N

Panama in Rainforest

in the rainforrest
a sudden thud of raindrop
on my panama

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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15 Responses to Haiku For Carpe Diem Special #41, Kikusha-Ni’s ‘lost in the woods’

  1. howanxious says:

    Neat! Well-written.. 🙂

  2. Maggie Grace says:

    It’s in the same spirit but I felt that thud… I like your interpretation. Very you 🙂

  3. nightlake says:

    can connect to the sound of leaves falling on your hat. very well done

  4. And did the thud startle you to consciousness or lull you to somnolence? 🙂

  5. becca givens says:

    Oooooh, caught by surprise!!

  6. JazzBumpa says:

    at JRB’s blog
    the sudden tongue thrust
    high in his cheek

    Cheers!
    JzB

  7. Ese' s Voice says:

    The mood is definitely there…very vivid and nicely captured in your haiku, JRB 🙂

  8. Perfectly adopted haiku 🙂

  9. 4joyjoanne says:

    and panama hats are de rigeur in the rainforest, aren’t they?

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