Haiku Carpe Diem Special #37, Kyoshi Takahama’s ‘the night of Spring’

Today’s Carpe Diem Haiku prompt is Kyoshi Takahama’s ‘the night of Spring’

haru no yo ya tsukue no ue no hiji-makura

the night of Spring –
an elbow-pillow
on the desk

731px-Trench_at_night

last night of spring
moon shines over the trenches
tomorrow a man

Not really in the spirit of Takahama’s, but sometimes you just gotta take what the prompt prompts 🙂

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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5 Responses to Haiku Carpe Diem Special #37, Kyoshi Takahama’s ‘the night of Spring’

  1. jazzbumpa says:

    grim entry
    only a man tomorrow
    if you’re still alive

    JzB

  2. Green Speck says:

    I loved your different take on this prompt !!!

  3. I like this take on Kyoshi’s haiku. Sometimes you’ve just to take what’s coming to mind after reading a haiku or something else.

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