Haike Carpe Diem #143, Zansetsu (remaining snow)

The Carpe Diem Haiku prompt today is Zansetsu (remaining snow).

Writing about snow on a 28c late summer’s day is never easy, but I hope that my remaining snow uncovers something to your liking…

Dead-animal-in-the-snow-not-enough-grass-that-year-300x205Image Credits

winter keeps secrets
spring uncovers the truth –
remains in the snow

083-The-remaining-snowImage Credits

schoolyard snow retreats
children thirsting for friendship
find the spring on tap

Snow Man ArmyImage Credits

whilst spring brings new life
major zanestsu commands
snowman genocide

As always, thank you for dropping by today, beforer you too melt away I welcome your comments.

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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23 Responses to Haike Carpe Diem #143, Zansetsu (remaining snow)

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Oh, you’ve just had way too much fun with this prompt! 🙂

  2. Maybe there are times when truth shouldn’t be uncovered? Maybe?

    Last Traces of Snow

  3. JazzBumpa says:

    Your entries are always top notch.
    Today’s are brilliant.

    Cheers!
    JzB

  4. kz says:

    perfect, that first haiku…
    oh too bad, the snowmen look so cute.lol really fun haiku

  5. Delightful John
    and to be inspired when it is warm in your world
    bravo
    Spring on tap my favorite

  6. Lovely! and because of the last pic I have to ask: are you a Doctor Who Fand?

  7. WabiSabi says:

    I agree it is hard to write haiku on a season word that is clearly NOT outside your window! You did well in spite of the heat! The last one is reminiscent of Calvin and Hobbes, a cartoon you would probably love, if you aren’t familiar with it already! There is snowman genocide, homicide and more! all from the mind of a five year old boy!

  8. jrbsays says:

    Calvin & Hobbes – I know of the cartoon from my days in the UK, but haven’t read it since. I must look it up again on your recommendation.

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  10. aloha JRB – i particularly like the idea in the first ku that beneath the remaining snow there is the revelation of a truth. aloha.

  11. Ah the first ane reminds me of a saying in swdish…
    det som göms i snö – kommer fram i tö

    what you hide in snow
    is revealed in thaw

    Then that snowman genocide was both funny and tragic

  12. That first photo is amazing. Your match was perfect.

  13. siggiofmaine says:

    Awesome as usual…never disappointed here…last set…love ☺
    Thank you
    Peace

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