Haiku Carpe Diem Special #21, Chiyo-Ni’s Spring Rain

Today’s Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt is Spring Rain by Fukada Chiyo-Ni

harusame ya utsukushiu naru mono bakari

Spring rain
everything just grows
more beautiful

I have tried to keep the same syllable count as Chiyo-Ni’s, but a slightly different look at what might happen during a spring rain.

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Image Credits

Spring rain
Weary Escargot
Hits the snail trail

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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10 Responses to Haiku Carpe Diem Special #21, Chiyo-Ni’s Spring Rain

  1. This is like really written ages ago, JRB. With that…indescribable wisdom…of life. Liked a lot.

  2. kz says:

    slowly but surely ^^ i love the old haiku feel in this..

  3. WabiSabi says:

    And they do leave a trail!!! I got a chuckle even though those ‘slugs’ as we call them are my arch enemy!!

  4. I love the snails (the one with the shells) but the slugs are terrible.

  5. Slowly, very slowly the snail is greeting Spring. Nicely done.

  6. ElizOF says:

    Love that escargot haiku… adorable. 😉

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