Haiku Carpe Diem #95, Blues

Today’s Carpe Diem Prompt is Blues.

I’m sat sipping my morning coffee at our beachside camp and the only blue is the perfect sky. Still I thought I’d give it a go before heading for a swim.

Slow hand on a Strat’
Will I see you in heaven?
Child gone, that’s the Blues!


About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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7 Responses to Haiku Carpe Diem #95, Blues

  1. Sainter says:

    Quick mind and slow hand. Lovely! 🙂


  2. I read that last line as “Child gone (forever)”—and that really would be the blues!



  3. Awesome! What a wonderful little gem … very deep in it’s meaning … thank you for sharing.


  4. artmusedog says:

    powerful haiku on ‘blues’ ~

    (A Creative Harbor) on blogger ^_^ on blogger


  5. 4joy says:

    you came up with a sad note, even under that warm blue sky…..interesting


  6. It couldn’t have been blues without that subtone of sadness I could hear in yours. Wonderful.


  7. brudberg says:

    I read this as sad beyond blues. Well done.


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