Haiku Carpe Diem #85, Hill

Today’s Carpe Diem prompt was Hill

Do Oceans give thanks
To the mountains and hills that
Cried them a river?

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When reaching their peak
Do hills long to be mountains
Or covet a cave?

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Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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3 Responses to Haiku Carpe Diem #85, Hill

  1. siggiofmaine says:

    I read the first one and thought WoW. Then I realized there was a second and that was wonderful too. Thanks I needed that … perfect timing.
    I REALLY like the last line of the first haiku…

    Happy New Year…

  2. the first one was fabulous – wonderful personification…..hope the oceans aren’t ungrateful….
    the second – I believe all hills strive for mountain status, don’t you?

  3. becca givens says:

    Hopefully nature, unlike us, is satisfied with its accomplishments … because nature does such magnificent work!! 🙂 Very nicely done!!
    Fairies Promenade

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