Haiku Pouring of Petals

Reading through the Carpe Diem haikus for Early Plum Blossoms this morning I came across this wonderful post by Tea with a Pirate:

new kind of blizzard
when snow has melted and gone
-early plum blossoms

I went to write a response and the following  came from my fingers, I guess it follows on from his ‘new kind of blizzard

Pouring of petals
Cast pink where grass was greener
The fruit of your limbs

Not my Carpe Diem entry for today, but I wanted to share it anyway.

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About jrbsays

Just a regular married father of three type of guy. Writer of Haiku, founder of www.DementiaJourneys.com and other bits and other bobs.
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10 Responses to Haiku Pouring of Petals

  1. siggiofmaine says:

    Thanks for sharing…I like it a lot. I like also the idea that haiku friends are spawning new ideas in the thoughts of other haiku poets.
    That didn’t make sense, but I take the elderly prerogative and let YOU take the words and figure them out !
    Hope you are in a snow free zone

    • jrbsays says:

      Thank you.
      It was interesting, I didn’t plan to write a haiku as a reply to Tea with a Pirate’s Carpe Diem entry, it just came out as I typed.
      It makes me think that might be a nice ‘game’ to play, each contributor adding a haiku to the previous one to form a cascading haiku. Mmmmm

  2. dulcinaandgnome says:

    Brilliant and hopeful response to another haiku, praising work and nature.
    🙂

  3. artmusedog says:

    lovely and even though we are just starting Winter ~ I can feel spring in your haiku ~

    (A Creative Harbor ~ aka ~ ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^)

  4. Lovely haiku JRB … it’s almost Spring here on Carpe Diem 🙂

  5. kz says:

    Beautiful…each word lovely

  6. becca givens says:

    You are so cleverly inspired!! 😀
    Plum Blossoms

  7. brudberg says:

    Very nice answer. 🙂

  8. yerpirate says:

    Wonderful! I think its an idea worth continuing, will try!

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