Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #X, Atreyee’s “The Soul drenched in Love”

Today’s Carpe Diem Tan Renga c is Atreyee’s “The Soul drenched in Love”. The challenge to add two 7 syllable lines to the given haiku to form a renga.

the Soul drenched in love
seeks nothing- gives everything
finds Buddha within

freed from the mirror, where
one comes before everything

Smiles, love and laughter

© John Belchamber 2013

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Just a regular married father of three type of guy living on Gubbi Gubbi land. Occasional writer of Haiku.
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10 Responses to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #X, Atreyee’s “The Soul drenched in Love”

  1. Thoughtful completion. Made me smile. 🙂
    -HA

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  2. E A M Harris says:

    An interesting thought, and so true.

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  3. Panchali says:

    Scraping off the grey dense air…Nicely done!

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  4. artmusedog says:

    very contemplative and enlightened completion ~ wonderful ~ carol, xxx

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  5. Sun says:

    love found in the mirror and or cell phone – so hard to resist the self. i enjoyed your completion 🙂

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  6. atrm61 says:

    So true JRB-once we stop obsessing over our own “projected” image-inside and outside,we attain peace-fantastic completion:-)

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  7. Very nice composed 2nd stanza … makes the scene complete.

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