Today’s Carpe Diem Tan Renga c is Atreyee’s “The Soul drenched in Love”. The challenge to add two 7 syllable lines to the given haiku to form a renga.
the Soul drenched in love
seeks nothing- gives everything
finds Buddha within
freed from the mirror, where
one comes before everything
Smiles, love and laughter
© John Belchamber 2013
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Thoughtful completion. Made me smile. 🙂
-HA
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Thank you HA.
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An interesting thought, and so true.
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Scraping off the grey dense air…Nicely done!
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Thank you. It seems people have mirrors (or mobile phone cameras) pointed at their faces far too much these days 🙂
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very contemplative and enlightened completion ~ wonderful ~ carol, xxx
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Why thank you Carole. I’m pleased it made you pause a while 🙂
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love found in the mirror and or cell phone – so hard to resist the self. i enjoyed your completion 🙂
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So true JRB-once we stop obsessing over our own “projected” image-inside and outside,we attain peace-fantastic completion:-)
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Very nice composed 2nd stanza … makes the scene complete.
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